Rough Cut

This is my rough cut from my music video. Overall feedback included too much footage of singing too early in the piece. Another is that, in order to make the clips of the lads on the street more idealistic and perfect, and less like a group of kids hanging around school, slow many of the shots down, except for during the robbery. An aspect of the video I was unsure about including was the unmuted audio during the very first shot, which includes the diegetic sound of the playing television and the guitar being picked up. This experiment seemed to pay off, as I didn't gain any negative feedback regarding it, and some mentioning they liked its inclusion, and that it added realism, suggesting the guitar, and the full band, are playing live.